monstasugakookie thank you for requesting a review - I hope you find it useful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
2.5/5
I can see where you're coming from with the cover, I just don't think it does any favours for your book. I like the picture you've used of Jimin because it makes him look very regal, but the font just feels a bit cramped and gets lost in the picture. I also think the subtitle could have been in a font which suited the vibe of the cover more because it sticks out quite a lot.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
3/5
Firstly, it is a great piece of writing- there is no denying that. It's sexy, mysterious, and full of tension. But it's just a bit too long for a description. As well as this, it doesn't really tell us much about the story. I think perhaps maybe a shorter quote from the story combined with a two line summary would have a much better effect just because it would attract more readers.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4/5
Although we haven't gotten into the main part of the plot yet, I thought this was really exciting and had a great pace to it. I'm a sucker of fics that involve royalty because I think they're always really interesting, and so I am very intrigued by how your plot is going to progress. I also liked how you built up mystery and suspense surrounding certain aspects of the plot like why she is running away and what Jimin's deal is.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4.5/5
I thought the flow of this book was really nice, and the writing worked really well in keeping up a steady pace. I also thought your dialogue was really good because you only used it when necessary. Perhaps you could explore her emotions a little more, but other than that I thought it was great.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
3.5/5
I didn't really feel like I got the biggest sense of who the main character is yet, but then again she has been going through quite an action-packed scenario and so I understand that emotional character development will probably come later. I was quite intrigued about Jimin, and I'm sure there's a lot to unpack with his character later on.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I think when it comes to the development of your characters, placing them in situations where they might feel uncomfortable is always a great way of showing us who they really are. Think about not just what their body will do to react to situations, but what their mind will be doing as well.
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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
I think you have a very promising start to a great book!
