mclkytae thank you for requesting a review - I hope it's useful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
3.5/5
I like the overall aesthetic of the cover, and I think that the Polaroid-like vibe of the picture looks really cool. I'm not a huge fan of the background colour though just because I think it dulls the cover a little bit - perhaps a red or blue would work better.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
3.5/5
While it is a great description which properly introduces the plot - it's just too long. I think perhaps you need to pick out the key details and rewrite it in a way that is more concise and will therefore grab people's attention quicker.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
5/5
I thought this was fascinating, and I loved the general premise of the writing. Also, what a brilliant plot twist at the end of the most recent chapter! I thought the pace moved beautifully throughout, and I really enjoyed reading it.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
5/5
No flaws at all! This was written really professionally, and I thought your writing flowed really well throughout the chapters. You had a great mix of dialogue and description, and overall I thought that your writing was really strong.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
4/5
Seeing as the book has just gotten started I didn't feel too attached to any of the characters yet, but Yerim was very charming and I think she has the possibility to be a really interesting character. Taehyung was also very mysterious and I think you have a lot to play around with his character.
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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
It seems like you have a really great start to an amazing book!
