jeonchlo thank you so much for requesting another review - I hope it's useful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
4.5/5
First off, loving the new matching covers! I think this cover has a really simplistic but effective look to it, and the font you've used is both really pretty but also clear to read. I also love the picture of Jimin you've chosen, and I think overall it all works very well.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
4/5
I really like the line you've taken from the book because I think it does set the tone for the book, and also highlights the obstacles they will go through as a pair. I think potentially you could give a little more detail about the story, but overall I think it is very effective.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
3.5/5
While I liked the overall premise of the plot, I did notice a few plot holes which made things hard to follow. For example, we never really learn what Jimin did to break the promise - all we know is that he did at some point and for the reader that's quite hard to understand because we don't know what he's done.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4/5
I liked your style of writing in this book because it felt very poetic and that was an interesting experience to go through while reading. I did notice quite a few grammatical mistakes in the chapters which sometimes hindered the overall flow of the writing, but some editing would be able to fix that in a heartbeat.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
4/5
I thought Taylor was very likeable because you showed how she was vulnerable, and I think we got a real sense as a reader of who she was as a person. I think potentially you could have gone in further with Jimin's emotions and potentially dug into his feelings more, but overall I did really like the way you characterised them.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I think the main thing that struck me was the lack of clarity about what Jimin does to break the promise just because that's what the whole book is centred around and so it needs to be very clear and well-explained.
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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
Another lovely book, and with some tweaking it should be perfect!
