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⭐️️ COVER ⭐️
3.5/5
I think it's a very clear cover, but I think perhaps it could have been a little more exciting. I like the picture of Seokjin that you've used because I think it does represent his amnesia and vulnerability in quite a subtle way. I like the idea behind the way you have displayed the title but I think perhaps a different font would have worked better.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
3.5/5
I think your description does build up suspense and tension for the book, but it doesn't make the storyline itself that clear. I understand that you're going for the mysterious vibe, but I think perhaps a clearer description of what the plot is actually about would help to attract more readers.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4.5/5
I thought you had a really interesting concept with this story, and it remained exciting and fascinating throughout. I thought you captured Seokjin's confusion throughout very convincingly, and I enjoyed watching as the story progressed. I also liked the twist that occurred in the later chapters because I really wasn't expecting it.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4/5
I thought your writing flowed really nicely throughout the book, and it helped carry the plot along. I think perhaps you could have played around more with the idea of Jin writing what he remembers in the notebook because I thought that was an untapped opportunity for something really cool in the story. Overall, it was very good.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
5/5
You created lots of mystery around your characters which made them all really interesting and exciting to learn about. I thought you made Seokjin very intriguing to the reader, and I was so interested to find out the truth about him. I can tell that you still have a lot more to reveal about the characters.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I personally think 'WE' works better with the story because you place such an emphasis on Seokjin being confused about who this 'we' is. I also think that you do build up a good amount of suspense between the chapters because I was waiting and waiting to see what would happen.
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