Auria_xox thank you for requesting a review - I hope you find it useful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
3/5
You've change your cover since you made this request! I actually preferred the other one just because it had a much darker tone to it, and I thought it represented the vibe of the story much better. I'm not a huge fan of the fonts you've used just because they don't really stand out from the cover, and kind of get washed into the background picture. I do like the picture of Yoongi you've used though because I think it subtly hints towards more magical/supernatural aspects of the book.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
3.5/5
Quick thing before I forget - you've written 'looses' rather than 'loses'. A very small grammatical mistake but may be a deal breaker for some very fussy readers! I thought this was an effective description in setting up the story well, and it was concise which worked in its favour.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4.5/5
A very interesting concept, and one that keeps you on the edge of your seat. I loved the whole idea of time travelling mixed with murder because it kept everything very exciting. Potentially the pace could have been slowed a little bit because sometimes it was a lot to take in, but that could also reflect the pace at which things are happening around Yoongi and therefore would be very effective at doing that.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
3/5
I did notice a few grammatical and spelling mistakes in the chapters, and so maybe you could go back and edit them later on. I thought perhaps you could have delved deeper into Yoongi's emotions about everything that is happening around him because sometimes it felt a bit rushed. Overall, the writing was good and flowed really nicely.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
3.5/5
While I really liked all the characters, I didn't feel like I got to know any of them very well. There was almost too much focus on the action happening, and not enough focus on the emotions of the characters. I think perhaps you could have developed the character of Jimin more as well.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I think just expanding on the things that are happening in the story would make the pace more natural, and would help to ensure clarity.
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