I like the actual picture you've used in the cover because I think it really highlights the plot of the story in a subtle way. However, I find the title quite hard to read just because of the colour you've chosen. While its in a cool formation coming down the page, I don't think the font or colour is best at clearly showing the title.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
3/5
It took me a minute to understand the description but that might just be because I'm a little sleep-deprived. While I like the quote from the book, I actually prefer the description of the book that you put in the first chapter when explaining the plot. I just think you need to clarify further what the book is actually about.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
5/5
I really enjoyed this storyline. I thought it was incredibly creative and imaginative, and I loved the fact that you had scenes in heaven and on earth. I am a bit of a sucker for those kind of stories, and I thought it was really well executed.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4/5
I thought you had a great balance of dialogue and description in most the chapters which helped the book flow nicely. As well as this, I liked how you used dialogue to develop your characters and I felt like I really got a sense of all the characters through the way they spoke. The chapters were engrossing and exciting, and overall it was a very fun thing to read.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
5/5
I really liked all your characters! I thought your development of Taehyung throughout the book was super interesting to read about, and watching him change and grow was a fascinating experience. Jungkook's character was also really interesting, and I was really intrigued to learn more about him and the way he was feeling about the situation. Overall, I thought the way you characterised your characters was really clever and helped create a really interesting dynamic element to the book.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I skimmed over one of the unedited chapters, and I think you've really made a massive improvement on the writing. As a result, the book feels more professional and you can move the plot along in a more sophisticated manner.
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