For anyone who actually bothers reading these, (I know, I hate these too), I'm trying to go back and make my chapters a little more professional (aka romance one actually expects between two people who have the hots for each other). But in all honesty, its kind of hard to write romance when I've got literally zero experience on the subject. I want to write romance, but I have zero tolerance for cheesy, unrealistic romantic scenes, feedback would be appreciated.
There is nothing I can't stand more than characters that say 'I love you' in the first five chapters of meeting each other. (Pretty sure that's not how true romance works?)
Bash my work, please. I can't learn or make this better without honest feedback.
But also be respectful, I do write this on my own time (aka when I am not studying for college). And yes, I am aware that the first couple of chapters are almost identical to the book, but seriously, starting has always been the hardest for me.
Added mention, do you think I should take down the individual books?
xoxo,
Royal Blue
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Luminescent (Inheritance Cycle and Beyond)
FanfictionMal, daughter of none, lives on a small farm in rural Carvahall with her two cousins, Eragon and Roran, and her uncle, Garrow. One day, she and her cousin Eragon experience a mystifying explosion that results in the pair finding two stone. Follow th...
