Hi makkale!
just a kutty talk...story epdi iruku? ungalku pudichiruka? what do you feel about my writing style?
na vanthu professional writer kedayathu..I am just a debut writer..I try my level best to convey the emotions of my characters by simple words..ungalku athu connect aachu na athu tha enoda happiness and satisfaction while writing this story...so, pour your thoughts readerseyyy..
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Nandri vanakkam!
Vango, story kula povom....
'Solu da macha, ena vishayam? thideer nu kuptu iruka?'
Prakash shook his head disbelievingly, 'Apo unna en kupten nu unaku theriyathu..apdi thane da?'
He remained silent for a while before replying, 'ava kannu munnadiye ninnen macha, ava enna patha da..aana enna pathum pakatha mari poita..enala atha accept panikave mudila..ivlo naal enga iruntha enna aana onnume therila..aana vantha aprom kooda enkooda pesa avalku thonave ilala?' his voice shivered.
Prakash's mind slowly started to process on his doubts about his sister's behaviour, 'epdi da thonum?'
'enatheyy?'
Prakash bit his tongue and thought, 'iyayo..mind voice nu nenachu sathama pesitane!' and gave his usual thiruttu muzhi.
'Yennada?'
'Arksh-u mapla..athu vanthu da..huh..epdi da thonum ava unna gavanichu iruka mataa da..athan sonen' and Prakash exhaled with relief.
'Hmm..therila da..enakum athan confusing ah irunthichu..but romba kashtama irunthuchu da..avala pakanum da...neraya pesanum..elarayum evlo ala vacha..ipo ethume nadakatha mariye vanthu nikra..ivakita kovapadratha..ila vanthutale nu santhoshapadratha nu therila da'
'Pakalam mapla, avakita nangalum inum ethume pesala...ava konjam relax aana aprom peslam'
'Dei, porappo ennayum kupdunga da'
Prakash murmured, 'aama aama kuptaalum..'
'enna sonna?'
'ah..dha..bha..onnumila mapla..kandippa kupidren nu sonen da..'
Both fell silent while they were immersed in their own thoughts about her. One was kicked with the protective instinct towards his little one, while the other one was wondering that how would she react if she meets him.
Prakash broke the silence, 'aprom mapla, thangachi epdi iruka?'
'Na than avakita pesave ilaye macha?!'
Prakash thought for a moment, mentally facepalmed and continued, 'Dei LIC building-u, na Lavanya pathi keten da'
He saw how Arkshaan's face turned pale while asking about his wife.
'Hmm..nala irukaa da..'
'Yen da..inum ava kooda moonja thooki vachutu thaan irukiya? ni thane da avala adampidichu kalyanam panikitta? aprom ena da aachu unaku? apdi ena than prachna?' Prakash casually asked without knowing Arkshaan's riled up emotions.
Prakash saw him being silent, 'Sola pudikala na vidu mapla..aana ipo ava matum ila..Arwin um irukaan..avanukahavachum 2 perum konjam adjust pani ponga..ilana sarivarthu da..ennavo po..unna purinjukave mudila..'
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Red Heaven
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