a missing piece of the puzzle

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pilar pov:

the police drove as fast as he could. as he was driving, I was getting disoriented. my eye sight was becoming blurry. I didn't know what was happening. all I could see were trees, bright lights, and a pair of pale hands, gripping the steering wheel.

we finally made it to the hospital. but I couldn't get out of the car. I felt so weak.

officer: ma'am! ma'am!!! we're here!

I couldn't say anything. my eyes were on the verge of closing.

officer: ok. I'm gonna go get some help.

he closed my door, and went into the hospital.

officer pov:

Officer: I NEED HELP!!

nurse Johnson: what's the problem sir?

officer: I have a female, who is bruised all over the place.

-they both go to the car-

Nurse johnson: oh my gosh!

-the nurse goes back into the hospital, calls for a team of doctors and nurses-

-they all come back out, and put Pilar on a stretcher. they speed down the hallway to get her a room.-


Pilar pov:

doctor jones: hello! my name is Doctor Melanie Jones. I'll be with you for the rest of the night. where is your pain located?


- I couldn't talk. I couldn't even move.-

-dr. jones put Pilar in the room and leaves her with the nurses.-

Dr. Jones: officer, did she tell you what happened?

officer: yes. she said that her boyfriend had beaten her really badly.

Dr. Jones: oh shoot! I forgot to ask her what her name was.

Officer: her name is Pilar Hymen.

Dr. Jones: Pilar?? the Celebrity?

Officer: yes ma'am.

Dr. jones: I couldn't even recognize her.

-dr. jones goes back into the room.-

Dr.jones: okay everyone! in case you have been wondering, the patient's name is Pilar Hymen.

nurse Johnson: oh my goodness. I didn't even realize.

Dr. jones: we're going to an x-ray. if needed, we will do surgery.

-an hour later-

I wake up. and I'm in this hospital room. wondering as to why I cant remember anything that happened after I had gotten into the car. but all I can see is the white board that tells me my nurse's name, doctor's name and that I have surgery in a hour.

-an unknown lady knocks on the door-

Pilar: come in!

-the lady walks in-

Pilar: MOMMY! I'm so glad you're here.

before she could say anything, the doctor came in.

Dr. Jones: hello. I see that you're wide awake! how are you feeling?

Pilar: terrible.

Dr.Jones: I can see that. but we're going to help get better.

Pilar: this is my mother.

Dr. Jones: oh my goodness! Phyllis hymen! how do you do.

Phyllis: well, i'll be a lot better once my little girl gets better.

Dr.jones: we'll make sure of that. (we all smile.) ill be back to get you prepped for surgery in an hour.


Pilar: okay.

-the doctor leaves-

Pilar: I could really use some music? got some earphones?

Phyllis: and your cd player!

Pilar: thank you. I wanna listen to some Marvin Gaye.

-Phyllis made this stank look on her face, but Pilar ignored it.-

-there was another knock on the door-

Pilar: come in!

Nurse Johnson: hey everybody! i'm your nurse, Alicia Johnson. I come here to ask you some questions about your paperwork, before we can go on with the surgery. I just need you to check over the info to make sure that everything is right.

Pilar: (looks at the paperwork) everything is right!

Nurse: alrighty! see you at surgery.

Pilar: I wont see you! (everybody laughs). then the nurse leaves.

Pilar: mommy, how come the box that asks for the father's name isn't filled in? it's always blank on every hospital record of mine.

Phyllis: you're father died a long time ago. and I felt that before he had died, he was gonna use you and me for publicity. so I had made sure that he could never have evidence saying that you were his.

Pilar: how did he die?

Phyllis: well he had a lot of drug problems, but what really ended it all, was his father killing him.

Pilar: you know! that sounds a lot like Marvin Gaye! but my dad was probably a drug dealer. or a mechanic.

Phyllis: alright! its time to rest up for surgery.

Pilar: okay.




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