The Visitor

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Pilar Pov:

I wake up from my nap, only to hear the boys downstairs, giggling. so I walk downstairs to see what was going on.

-Pilar walks into the living room.-

Pilar: hey guys! how was the session?

Devante: it was great babe. I want you to get dressed, so that we can go to the police station, ok?

Pilar: ok.

-Devante's pov.-

Devante: be down here in 10.

-Pilar walks back upstairs to get freshened up.-

JoJo: you're really diggin' this girl.

Devante: I am!

K-ci: yea! more like "Whipped".

-they boys all laugh.-

-Pilar's pov.-

-the phone rings. she answers.-

Pilar: hello?

Malina: hey girly! how are you?

Pilar: i'm fine! its good to hear your voice. mom has been coming in and out of the house like crazy.

Malina: yea, well... that's mom. say, what's this I hear about you and Devante Swing?

Pilar: Well, we're taking our time. I like him a whole lot. We're going on our first date tonight.

Malina: aww! that's too bad, I was planning on stopping by the house tonight.

Pilar: you can still do that. but the boys will be here.

Malina: what boys?

Pilar: JoDeCi is staying with me now.

Malina: so you mean to tell me that momma is letting this happen?

Pilar: yep!

Malina: wow!

Pilar: well I've gotta go. see you later!

-they hang up.-

-Pilar goes downstairs.-

Pilar: i'm ready.

Devante: good.

Pilar: by the way, my sister is coming over later tonight.

Jo-Jo: ard.

-Pilar and Devante leaves.-

-2 hours later.-

Devante: so where do you want to go?

Pilar: I really wanna go to Chili's!

Devante: it sounds like you're having a craving!

-they both laugh.-

-they drive to Chili's.-

Waitress: here is your table, can I get you guys anything to drank?

Pilar: pink lemonade!

Devante: sprit.

Waitress: alright.

-the waitress leaves.-

Pilar: I just wanna say thank you for taking me to the police station.

Devante: no problem. I'm proud of you for going through with this process.

-waitress comes back.-

Waitress: here are the drinks. are you guys ready to order?

Pilar: I want the oriental chicken salad, with honey mustard.

Devante: i'll take a short rib and French fries.

Waitress: okay. I will be back.

-the waitress leaves.-

-MEANWHILE, BACK AT THE HOUSE.-

-DING DONG.-

Jo-Jo: who is it?

Malina: it's Malina!

-Jo-Jo opens the door.-

Jo-Jo: you must be Pilar's sister.

Malina: yep! how are you?

Jo-Jo: well, now that you have arrived, i'm all better.

Malina: (laughs) well, thank you.

-Malina and Jo-Jo sit on the couch and watch 'Richard Pryor in concert' on TV.

Jo-Jo: so are you older, or are you younger than Pilar?

Malina: i'm younger.

Jo-Jo: same dad?

Malina: actually, Pilar's father is Marvin Gaye, and my father is him (she points to the TV screen).

Jo-Jo: wait hold up... him? as in Richard Pryor?

Malina: yep!

Jo-Jo: wait, so your last name is Pryor?

Malina: no. it's Hyman.

Jo-Jo: oh. well, are you hungry? i cooked up some pasta.

Malina: yeah! sounds good! hey, where's the rest of the group?

Jo-Jo: they went to mall.

Malina: oh ok.

-MEANWHILE, AT CHILI'S.-

Pilar: you know, your foot is all the up my dress. (smiles.)

Devante: do you like it? (smiles).

Pilar: this isn't the place for this. (smiles).

Devante: So, am I hitting a sensitive spot? (foot goes higher to the point where it touches her vagina.)

-Pilar starts to get chills.-

Pilar: the food is coming!

-the waitress brings the food.-

Pilar: thank you!!

-AN HOUR LATER.-

-Pilar and Devante make it back home.-

-they walk into the house, kissing and touching her.-

-they go upstairs, about to go into the bedroom, but hears some strange noises.-

Pilar: where the hell is this noise coming from?

Devante: I don't know, but sure do wish that was us right now.

-Pilar hits Devante. they walk to each door to see where the noise was coming from.-

-they finally get to the right door.-

-Pilar peeks into the room. she is stunned by what she see. she instantly closes the door.-

Devante: who was it?!

-Devante is dragged to Pilar's bedroom by her.-

Pilar: It was sister and Jo-Jo!!!!!

Devante: what???? welp, anyway, i'm tired.

-He gets in Pilar's bed.-

Pilar: seriously? my bed?

Devante: i'm not sleeping in my room. they're doing it right next door to me.

-Pilar gets into the bed and puts a pillow over her ears.-

Pilar: goodnight bitch! (they laugh)



_______________________________________________________________________________________________________ long overdue story! I know. lol. but first things first, Phyllis def got around with these celebrity men. first Marvin, then Richard. also, Devante has gotta chill. his foot is gonna get Pilar pregnant. LMAO.




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