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I hope to return to this project someday, but it isn't feasible with my current health issues and life circumstances. I have to cut things from my workload so I can breathe. However, I still intend to complete my current li...
Source: Message board Genre: Fanfiction Secondary/subgenre(s): Dark romance Fandom: BTS Mature: Y LGBTQIAPK+: N Status: Ongoing First impressions: 28/40 Digging deeper: 55/100 Final thoughts: Complete
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Content/trigger warnings (instances and mentions of):
- Abuse and Relationships: Abuse (emotional, physical, verbal)
- Alcohol and Drugs: Drugging, substance abuse (illicit drug), substance use (alcohol)
- Death and Loss: Grief and loss depiction
- Hate, Discrimination, and Oppression: Misogyny/sexism, slut-shaming, workplace harassment
- Language: Mild to strong; mostly rare; frequent in certain chapters
- Mental Health and Suicide: Addiction, anxiety/panic attacks, confrontation of abuser, depression, hallucinations, intrusive thoughts, substance addiction, trauma
- Sex and Sexual Violence (semi-explicit): Dubious consent scenarios, sexual harassment/references
- Violence and Crime: Abduction/kidnapping, physical assault, violence (physical)
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First impressions: 28/40
Title: 10/10
This is a great title for a dark romance story. You know it's a mistake, but it's just too alluring to resist... yep. I love it.
Story description: 7/10
Well, you already know what I think about AI, so I won't belabor that point here, other than to say I'd prefer if you tried rewriting this in your own words. But otherwise, the content is good. It feels a bit odd that you don't name any of the protagonists, however. They're just referred to as "three souls" and then "they/their." I like the way you introduce them as "three souls" in the first sentence, though, so I wouldn't change that. I think the second sentence feels out of place and unnecessary, so I'd probably cut that and then change "they" to the characters' names in the following sentence.
