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    Bhagya by Uditasree

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    Source: Gardenia: A Review Shop -Chrysalis_Realm
    Genre: Short Story
    Mature: N
    Status: Complete
    First impressions: 34/40
    Digging deeper: 77/100
    Final thoughts: Complete
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    - Abuse and Relationships: Abuse (child, domestic), arranged/forced marriage, domestic violence
    - Alcohol and Drugs: Substance use (alcohol)
    - Death and Loss: Death
    - Hate, Discrimination, and Oppression: Misogyny
    - Language: Mild, rare
    - Mental Health and Suicide: Alcoholism
    - Pregnancy and Childbirth: Childbirth, pregnancy
    
                                
    
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    First impressions: 34/40
    Title: 9/10
    	Silly me. I Googled the English meaning of "bhagya" before I scrolled down and saw you'd provided the definition in the blurb. 😅
    	Anyway, destiny and luck. Sounds interesting. I like it. The only thing I can nitpick here is the full capitalization of the title. I prefer only the first letter being capitalized, but that's a stylistic choice, and you're perfectly fine to ignore me and leave it as is.
    Story description: 8/10
    	So, my first observation is that this doesn't read like a blurb. It reads like a mini-story. But I like it. It seems like it's giving some background information the reader will need for the actual story, and it sets the scene and the tone very nicely. I love its poetic beauty.
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