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Source: Review Shop by TheBlossomCommunity_ Genre: Fanfiction Fandom: BTS Mature: Y Status: Ongoing First impressions: 28/40 Digging deeper: 58/100 Final thoughts: Complete Note: Chapter 27 was the last available chapter as of the publishing of this review.
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Content/trigger warnings (instances and mentions of):
- Mental Health and Suicide: Amnesia/memory disorders
- Sex and Sexual Violence: Explicit sexual content
- Violence and Crime: Car accident, physical assault
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First impressions: 28/40
Title: 10/10
Seems appropriate for a romance story involving amnesia. I like it.
Blurb/synopsis: 7/10
First, I'm going to let you in on a little secret. Wattpad turns regular em dashes into plain hyphens within story blurbs, which is really annoying, but this symbol looks just like an em dash, and yet Wattpad leaves it alone: ―
So, I'd recommend changing the hyphens within the blurb to that, because I'm pretty sure you had em dashes there to begin with.
I think the first paragraph of the blurb is good. In the second paragraph, the "but" doesn't sit well with me. Maybe Jungkook doesn't know exactly what's going on with her, but it would stand to reason a person with amnesia would have inner conflict and mental turmoil, and that isn't really a contrast to what's going on with Jungkook. It compliments what's happening from his side. I think changing "But unknown to him" to something like "Meanwhile" would work better there.
