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Kaden Pearce

Fandom: Original

Age: 19

Gender: female

Species: Human

Sexuality: Unknown. She refuses to tell her friends to annoy them. ( In reality she's bisexual).

Occupation: Army infantry, currently serving in the 4th Regiment Battalion, Alpha Company. ( She just got out of boot camp and was deployed straight away)

Hair: Before she enlisted her light brown hair was very long, almost to her mid-waist. Just before boot camp she got it cut very short, to a boy's length. She doesn't mess with it very much because she doesn't have a lot of time. She usually just brushes it and walks out.

Eyes: Her eyes are a very dark brown. Even by her recruiters she is described as having a very fierce and determined gaze.

Body type/style: She is very lean and well built. She isn't overly muscular but boot camp got her decently toned. Even before basic training she was well built from taking dance. She isn't pale but she isn't tanned. Just fair skinned.

Height: 5"3

Weight: 115 lbs

Wears: Usually she's seen in her digicam ACU (army combat uniform) and tan boots. When she's doing PT (physical training) she usually wears a pair of old Nike running shoes, black basketball shorts and a tan shirt. When she wears civilian clothes it's usually any pair of loose jeans, sneakers, a t-shirt and occasionally a hooded jacket.

Personality: She is a very fierce girl with fire in her soul. She is an aggressive trainer and she will literally work herself to the ground. She has a very dry sense of humor and likes messing around with her squad mates. When she's on the field she's not the type to abandon anyone. She'll even go so far as to pull another person through the rest of a run even if she loses time. She's the kind of person who considers everyone a squadmate and believes very firmly in no man left behind. It doesn't happen often but when she gets worked up emotionally her actions become very reckless.

Hobbies: She took dance for 10 years. Ballet, jazz, and tap. In high school she was the commander of their school's JROTC Raider Team. She enjoys making films.

Strengths: Running, physical activities, dance, film making.

Weaknesses: She works herself too hard, she doesn't understand her physical limits, she's oblivious to people having a crush on her, she doesn't exactly have a temper but she can snap at people easily.

Bio: Kaden was born into a family who had very high expectations for her. She was the youngest of 7 other siblings and she was determined to always do her best. She loves dance, though at times she claims to hate it, and she's naturally the kind of person who stays fit. She has a high metabolism and her friends tease her over how short she is. When she decided to be an Infantryman (er woman?) her parents were supportive but apprehensive. Her dad tried to convince her to do anything other than infantry but she wouldn't change her mind. When she was finally old enough to enlist she did it without a second thought. Our story begins with her entering basic training.

(This character is still in development)

I have never done a character in the Army infantry– or anything else military related besides ones for nonexistent governments in post-apocalyptic stories. So bear with me.

This character sounds great. She's hardworking, she's ridiculously loyal, and has a reasonable backstory. She has a lot of flaws as well as plenty of notable traits. It's cool that she's serious about the Infantry but also really likes dancing– even if she doesn't admit it. She doesn't outwardly declare her sexuality, and that's something I find interesting. Her parents were supporting though a little disappointed, and that's a good change compared to the two main stories I've seen where either the parents are strictly against the idea or strictly force it.

I honestly can't find a fault. Nothing makes me do a double take or leaves me puzzled. A++ here.

10/10

Honestly, the person who made Kaden did an amazing job. Keep up the good work!