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Aurora Borealis

Pronunciation: A-roar-a Bore-ee-al-is

Name Meaning & Origin: The northern lights in Alaska and she was given to it by some random ass kid

Other Names/Birth Name: Winter Allen Scosha (it's her birth name and she forgot it)

Gender and Pronouns: Female/she/her

Birth Date & Place: November 2nd, 1991 in Barrow, Alaska

Astrological Sign: Scorpio

Catchphrase: "I want to see the world before I can't anymore."

Height: 4'10"

Species & Race: Human and white

Skin Color: Very faintly tanned

Birthmarks: A dark streak on her lower back

Extra Anatomy: A scar over her right eye and a scar under her left.

Hair Color: Ginger

Hair Length: Short and goes down to her neck

Eye Color: Pale blue in the center with a dark blue ring around the edge

Eye Type: Round and wide

Abnormalities: Her eyes

Vulnerabilities: Her blindness

Handicaps: She's slowly going blind and she has amnesia

Medication: Prozac, Celexa, and Zoloft

Disorders: Anger issues, leukocoria*, and amnesia

Reason for Health: She was born with anger issues and her leukocoria is genetic.

Wardrobe: A light brown coat with cream fluff on the hood and trims of the sleeves and bottom of the coat. She has a USA patch on the right shoulder of the coat and an ALASKA patch on the left. She also had her signature on the back of the coat. She wears denim shorts and snow boots with a fluffy trim.

Accessories: Goggles with black frames, grey straps, and red lenses, as well as a brown belt for her shorts.

Equipment: Cigarettes and a gun

Scent: Cherry blossoms

Scars: One over her right eye and another under her left

Tattoos: None

Backstory: Winter Allen Scosha (known as Aurora Borealis) was born November 2, 1991 in Barrow, Alaska. Her mother is Daniella Scosha and her father was Nicholas Scosha.

As a kid (ages 3-5) she had anger issues, so her parents went to the hospital. There they prescribed her anger management pills that she had to take from the point on to keep her anger at bay. Her mother also taught her methods for dealing with anger as well.

She was wild and loved the outdoors. Her hair was always a mess and she was covered in cuts, scrapes, dirt, mud, and snow. She took frequent showers since her mom forced her too. She loved playing with wild animals as well.

She was homeschooled for her pre-school and half of elementary. When she got to 3rd grade, she was sent to a private school. She was still a rowdy kid who got into trouble and didn't do anything except ask to go outside a lot. She would always mess up her uniform and get her hair messed up.

She was withdrawn from the private school and went back to being homeschooled. On a drive home from the store with her mother and father, her mother got into a serious accident, killing her father and throwing her mother out of the car.

She was taken to the hospital and woke up days later, having severe amnesia. Her mother was said to be missing. Winter, now have forgotten her name, was sent to Foster Care until her mother was found. In the Foster Care, she learned about the northern lights, also known as Aurora Borealis. She called herself that from then on.

She spent most of her teenage years in foster care (12-17) with no luck of finding her mother. The case was called off when her mother was never found and they had no more leads.

At 18 Aurora was given to a foster family who had moved from England with a daughter named Sky. Her and Sky became really close and the parents were kind too. Aurora decided to stay with them and moved back to England with them. Her and Sky moved out when Aurora was 23 and Sky was 18.

They bought a small house and made money off of being thugs and killing whoever they were told to. They met Romano (a gay ass tiger furry) and Jason ( a bisexual wolf furry) after a couple years and they became one big family, with Aurora taking most of the responsibility for herself.

Currently Aurora is 26 and Sky is now 23, and they continue their life normally.

*Leukocoria- The whitening of pupils.

This character took me off guard for several moments. And that's not a bad thing— I'm certainly not counting off for it. It just surprised me how extra the beginning was.

Which is actually a good thing because I'm assuming it means you put a lot of thought into this character.

I love the character and her disabilities. I've never heard of leukocoria.
However, it doesn't appear to really effect her, besides the quote.

FINALLY, parents that are reasonable and realistic!
They were very concerned about her anger issues, a problem that could've possibly worsened in the future, and took action rather than ignored it. Adding onto that, the Mom is very supportive, which is another major plus. And her foster family is very kind as well. Although I don't understand why they went from England, fostered Aurora, and then moved back. Was it because of a family issue? A job one of the parents had? Just generally disliking the place they had moved to?

She has a great personality and while the losing parents thing is quite common, I like how it turns out.

There were a few minor things that did bother me. Like how she obtained the name "Aurora Borealis". In the beginning you said "some random ass kid" gave it to her, but in her backstory it states she named herself after gaining interest in the topic. So is she the random ass kid? Or did this kid introduce her to the topic?

And the fact that she grows up to be this thug character completely tripped me. Can I just ask–
Why?
When??
What????

What made her want to become this? Did Foster Care mess her up that badly? But then again, Sky is with her on this, so was their family crappy?
And where did the furries come from? Don't get me wrong, the diversity is great. But where did Sky and Aurora meet them? On a job? A run in the market?

Or is this all revealed in the story and I'm just asking a bunch of irrelevant questions??

7/10.

I have a feeling most of the questions are answered within Aurora's story, and I will gladly change the rating if my questions were, in fact, pointless.

But I did like this character and her overall overview.

Hope you liked it! Correct me if I screwed up.