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So I've been writing a few new stories which is why updates have been slow but I'm still unsure whether to publish however this is one that I'm thinking of doing. Bio below

Avery had been in 'Little sunshines and Rainbows home for boys and girls' since she was 5 years old, before that she was living with her druggy mother who abused her often. After being placed into care, Avery was abused further and was living in constant fear, all her foster families abused her leaving her so scared that no one would even consider fostering or even adopting her. All Avery wanted was a loving home but can she ever get that.

Elijah West. His name brought fear into those who crossed him. He was merciless, cold hearted, cross him and you die.  He was a billionaire who ran
'West&Co' but that wasn't all, during the day he was a heartless business man and during the night he was a heartless criminal,  he was head of the mafia.
He had a secret though, one only a few knew about, his lost child, the one his girlfriend left with 15 years ago. will he ever find her or will he choose to replace her.

A bit of the story below

"The money Spencer and all this will be over"
"I dont have it, please one more week"
"You said that last time, I'm not sure I believe you"
"You wont kill me with a witness"
"Look around, there is no one here"
"Behind the bin"
That's when I freak out, this guy had seen me, I was dead. Maybe death is a good thing.
Suddenly I'm pulled up from my crouching position and I'm looking into the eyes of a man no older than 40. His glare was deep and his gaze hardened "who the hell are you" he asks pinning me to the wall, all my senses tell me to scream and run but the fear inside me causes me to scream. I have to think and quick. "Ellie" I say quickly, giving a fake name

So that's it, appreciate all feedback. Let me know what you all think.

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