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Welcome to the review shop of Espoir Community, 𝗟𝘂𝗰𝗶𝗳𝗲𝗿 𝗖𝗵𝗲𝗿𝘂𝗯𝘀, where we won't just give you an honest review from a reader's point of view but a writer's point of view as well. No one i...
Ok, Jungkook was daddy material in the most recent chapter- But I think the title suits the book because on the previous night Jungkook was just a little toddler and the next morning he's a grown-up man!
∆ Cover: 4/5
I'm In LOVE with the theme going on in the cover and banners! The cute drawing and font look soo good! But maybe try using a different font for the author's name!
∆ Description: 6/10
Short. Maybe you could add a bit more about the story. Just dialogue don't interest readers to read. Add maybe a summary of what will happen in the book.
∆ Protagonist usage: 3/5
The process of the story was great! At the start of the book, Nobody would've expected Jungkook to like Yeonhee!
∆ Plot: 9/10
Something I have never read before! It's something unrealistic, but then who comes on Wattpad to read realistic stuff!
∆ Flow: 17/20
I like your writing style. The flow was not that bad! It could have a bit of improvement because some of the scenes end in a bit of an abrupt way.
∆ Character development: 8/10
The most development was seen in Jungkook!! But maybe the readers will a bit more info on Jimin, Taehyung, and Yoongi.
∆ Grammar and vocals: 13/15
The grammar and the vocals in the book were pretty good!! But punctuation can use some improvement.
∆ Writing style: 9/10
As I said before, I liked your writing style! But one can always get better at writing!
∆ Overall: 4/5.
∆ Personal enjoyment: 5/5.
I loved reading it! It was my first time reading something with that type of plot, but I enjoyed it so much!
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Total marks: 82/100
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