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I loved the title and how it was both unique and had a very subtle yet interesting link to the story's main plotline.
• Cover: 1/5
Although it was a good picture of yoongi, it had no relevance to the book or its plot.
• Description: 5 /10
The description was too brief, in my opinion, and required better punctuation and grammar. It felt as if they were barely giving plot information and more of a brief character overview.
• Protagonist usage: 3/5
I feel like the usage of the two main characters was pretty good, as there was a good balance between the 2 of them and some of the other background characters. However, I found it a bit difficult to tell the main protagonist within the story.
• Plot: 6/10
I liked the idea that the writer had for this story, although I felt as though it was a bit cliche and overused in many books. I also would have preferred if they gave more depth about the character's personalities etc.
• Flow: 15/20
Overall the flow of the book was pretty smooth, although there were some parts (such as at the begging) where I was a little thrown off by the time skips as they felt too large and sudden.
• Character development: 6 /10
I felt that the characters' development could have been more gradual, and we could have had a bit of a slow-burn/lead-up to their climax.
• Grammar: 8/15
Whilst the grammar used was good, some of the sentences structures (such as saying 'go too much far') and punctuation used were a bit off, and the vocab was not very interesting.
• Writing style: 6.5/10
I like when a writer does different POVs and am not a huge fan of 3rd person, so when reading this, it did not seem that interesting due to it mainly being in the Third-person pov. However, it did flow quite well with the story and how the winter structured their chapters.
• Overall: 3/5
Overall it was an ok book (considering it was a short story), but I would have preferred more detail, in-depth characters, and possibly a more engrossing plot to boost this book.
• Personal enjoyment: 2/5
I am not a huge fan of these mythical Romeo and Juliet kinds of books, so this was not something I would have wanted to read. But the writer did do a good job when it came to writing the book for readers who are into this genre of reading.
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Total marks: 60.5/100
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