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Username: _jugnuu_ Title: Through Her Eyes Genre: Romance, Short Story Reviewer: Yoonqix281
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✶Title: 5/5
It's a great title! The female lead is the male lead's eyes after he donated them to her.
✶Cover: 4/5
A cover should be simple yet eye-catching. I feel like a different font should be used on the cover and there are a lot of unnecessary filters added to the cover.
✶Description: 7/10
The description was good. But this line "She loved him, He betrayed her" I don't think he betrayed her. SHE THOUGHT he betrayed her but instead he gave her his eyes so her to not lose her job.
✶Protagonist usage: 3/5
There wasn't a lot of the protagonist's back story and all. It's just them meeting, falling in love, and after a bit of a rollercoaster, they get married.
✶Plot: 7/10
Good plot but wasn't the story a bit too fast and unrealistic. I mean who can fall in love so fast and easily with a person they've just met.
✶Flow: 16/20
Because it's short story stuff that happened fast like before I could comprehend the male lead just proposed to the female lead to marriage, they already had an accident and the female lead lost her eyes. I felt like the story should've gone a bit slow but the rest is great.
✶Character development: 8/10
The character development was great!
✶Grammar and vocals: 14/15
The grammar is good! Could use some changes here and there but it's great!
✶Writing style: 8/10
Love the way you mention the day and how long it's been since the last scene. It's great!
✶Overall: 4/5
I liked the book!
✶Personal enjoyment: 4/5
Great book loved it!
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Total marks: 80/100
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