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The title was nice, however, I don't get the significance.
★Cover: 4/5
The words were a bit blur, otherwise, it was nice.
★Description: 10/10
The description was written very nicely. It showed us a peek at the story without spoiling it.
★Protagonist usage: 5/5
The protagonist was used well enough.
★Plot: 10/10
The plot was well developed. There weren't plot holes and the story was intriguing.
★Flow: 18/20
The flow too as well because there were no grammatical errors or plot holes. However, I believe the vocabulary was on a higher level. I suggest using simple yet attractive words so it is easy for the reader to understand.
★Character development:: 9/10
The protagonists, Zemira and Gabe, both of their personalities evolved adequately.
★Grammar and vocals: 14/15
The grammar and vocals were nice. The dialogues too were well written and suited the character's personality.
★Writing style:: 9.5/10
The writing style was nice. Punctuation was used correctly making the writing understandable.
★Overall: 4/5
Overall, your story is really good! I enjoyed it.
★Personal enjoyment: 4.5/5
The story was really interesting and just my type. I enjoyed it a lot!
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★Total marks: 92/100
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