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Author: Jeon-Ani Book title: her past & His present Genre: Romance, Fan-fiction, Slice of life Reviewer: xxfrozenhibaxx
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Title: 4/5
Good title!
✶Cover: 5/5
Loved the cover, the title looks great on the cover and its aesthetic.
✶Description: 10/10
Great description, loved the way how you connected feeling and blood.
✶Protagonist usage: 3/5
Both protagonists were used well! Both of them had their story explained well! I felt like the book only consisted of the protagonists talking about their past and present- there was nothing else. Tho I don't know if there are more characters added in future chapters.
✶Plot: 8/10
The plot was good! A bit confusing at first but as I got used to it, It was good!
✶Flow: 16/20
The flow was good.
✶Character development: 8/10
Great character development!
✶Grammar and vocals: 13/15
Make sure not to use abbreviations. I saw a few abbreviations here and there, they were easy ones, but make sure not to use any in later chapters.
✶Writing style: 6/10
The writing style can use a bit of improvement. Dialogues are one after the other, which makes the reader lose track of who's saying what.
✶Overall: 3/5
✶Personal enjoyment: 4/5
I enjoyed reading the book!
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Total marks: 80/100
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