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𝗛𝗲𝗹𝗹𝗼 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲!
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The title fits well but wasn't very intriguing. Try using a simple and hooking tile.
• Cover: 5/5
The cover was beautiful! I love the way it's edited and the coloration, font style is on its top.
• Description: 9/10
The description was very well written however it could've been better if it was a bit shortened.
• Protagonist usage: 5/5
Very well done.
• Plot: 8/10
The plot was interesting however it seems a bit cliché.
• Flow: 17/20
The flow of the story was disrupted due to incorrect grammar. Punctuation and tense forms mistakes were found. Try using google docs or Grammarly.
• Character development: 9/10
The characters developed well accordingly I excepted them to be. Excellent work.
• Grammar and vocals: 12/15
The dialogues had a lot of ellipses making it look a bit shabby and there were a few grammatical errors as well. Try improving your vocabulary since it's important to have a good grip on vocabulary to make the reader feel all the emotions.
• Writing style: 8/10
The ellipsis seemed shabby, otherwise great work!
• Overall: 4.5/5
Overall, the book is very interesting and well written, good luck!
• Personal enjoyment: 4.5/5
I found this book very interesting! I wish you all the best for the future!
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Total marks: 86/100
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