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𝗛𝗲𝗹𝗹𝗼 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲!
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It gives an insight into the story but also keeps the reader curious.
• Protagonist usage: 4/5
The usage of Daisy is great, but the writer should have elaborated more on Philip's past like his relationship with his past friends, ex-girlfriends, and even his parents.
• Plot: 10/10
The Plot is great and the fact that Philip is blind instantly makes the reader hooked to the story.
• Flow: 20/20
The flow is great.
• Character development: 8/10
The character development of Daisy and most of the characters is amazing but Philip does not seem to have any development in personality.
• Grammar and vocals: 15/15
The Grammer and vocals are amazing with great description and I didn't notice any spelling mistakes.
• Writing style: 10/10
The dialogues and descriptions are well written.
• Overall: 5/5
It's an amazing story and I haven't seen books like these on Wattpad.
• Personal enjoyment: 5/5
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Total marks: 97/100
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