048: Motherland

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This poem is about a love triangle. The girl is cute and sweet, the first guy is cool and passionate, the other guy is nice and friendly, and they end up respecting each other and waiting for college for the big reveal of the girl's decision. It doesn't show in the poem, but try focusing on how it says. The POV is in the first guy.

XLVIII

MOTHERLAND

I met a sage

From the mountain trails

And he talked of crossing roads

He wasn't rich

But he had a coin

That could buy a safe abode

He had some wine

On his leather bag

That he carried all along

And he drank of it

With a bliss so free

And a gleeful-spir'ted song

He had a cane

Which he used to walk

That was long and dark and old

And he used it well

With a fiery hand

And an arm that ne'er grew cold

He grew a beard

That was thick as thoughts

And was white as crystal snow

And he smiled and rubbed

On his aging tress

Where relief was bound to go

His clothes were thin

As the winds of March

When the flowers bloomed and grew

With the scent of spring

In the golden rain

As the cloud of butt'rflies flew

He talked of fields

All the strawb'rry fields

That had grown in distant dawn

And he kissed them so

All the strawb'rry fruits

That he used to love and fawn

He shed a tear

On the arid soil

To the way to strawb'rry land

For he longed to taste

All the strawb'rry steps

To the heart of sweetness grand

He envied them

All the strawb'rry fields

That once grew in farther east

For the clearing came

And the strawb'rry grew

On the land he loved the least

The strawb'rries grew

On the raspb'rry pops

And the blackb'rry shakes and cakes

And he gloomed so blue

As his blueb'rry jams

For the love he cannot make

He walked away

From the mountain trails

And away from the strawb'rry dreams

For he was so old

And he can't provide

All the sparkle, shine, and gleam

He trod a path

To horizons far

To the suns unknown and lost

And I followed so

To the strawb'rry tears

With the sadness it had cost

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