Fragments - A Cookie Run Fanfiction

Notice: A Community Decision

So, after all this time of me having one crisis after another, I want to make an announcement. I want to continue the book again, but I also feel like I shouldn't. 

After letting a few closer friends read this fiction, I let them give me a brutal opinion on it. One that I thought I was going to be ready for- but it seems I wasn't. 

I wanted to see what they thought of my work, and they all basically admitted that it was kinda garbage-

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I didn't think this book was that bad, personally. However, they vote on it was basically unanimous. I want to believe that they just didn't like my style of writing- or anything else. However, I get the feeling a lot of the readers may agree with what they had to say. 

They say that I ruined the book soon in, and that I have been dragging the plot through the mud to the point where it is annoying- despite it having 'at least passable pacing. 

My question is: 

Does anyone actually want me to continue? Did anyone actually enjoy the book that much to where they want to see it picked up, or should I start a new Cookie Run Fanfic and Put this book on permanent hiatus?

All comments are welcome. Do not hide how you feel about this book, even if you think it will hurt my feelings. The only thing I do ask, is that you do not bully each other in the comment section if you run across opinions you do not like.