SORRY FOR THE SHORT CHAPTER!! I had a question anyway... Are my chapters too long? or would you like them a little shorter? I usually do about 1500 words per chapter, maybe more. I can do 1000, easier for me, and there will be times where i'll do more, less, blah blah blah. LOL hope you like it :)
Tris POV
I wake in a hospital room. Great. There's an IV in my arm and a sleeping Tobias next to me. It takes a lot of strength to nudge him.
"Tobias," I croak. His eyes flutter open.
"Tris," He says, rubbing his eyes, then grabbing my hand.
"You okay?" He asks. I nod slightly.
"I'm so sorry," He says.
"You did nothing,"
"I should've known." He says.
"He says he sent you letters. Is that true?" I ask. He looks down.
"You lied," I whisper.
"I didn't mean to,"
"Really?" I question.
"I don't think it's that big a deal," He says.
"Kind of,"
"They meant nothing,"
"You could have told me he was trying to reach you!" I say. We look eachother in the eyes, trying to figure out eachother's secrets.
"Tobias, what kind of relationship do we have without honesty?" I say.
"I should have told you." He says. We stare in silence.
"I'm sorry," He says. I take a deep breath.
"It's okay. Next time tell me," I say.
"Can I get you anything? You need to eat," He says. I nod.
"Just a muffin," I say. He nods and leaves the room. He returns a few minutes later with two muffins.
"Here," He says, handing me one.
"Thanks," I say.
"Are you feeling better?" He asks. I nod.
"Better now," I say, grabbing his hand. He smiles at me.
"Our little friend has been wanting to see you," He says. I chuckle.
"Can I see her?" I ask. He nods as he runs out of the room. He returns with a crying Ellie in his arms.
"Ellie," I say as Tobias hands me her. He places her small frame in my arms. She has a small red face and tears run down her face. I wipe them away.
"How is she?" I ask.
"Fine. Just underfed. They had her on IV for a little while. I fed her a bottle from the fridge and Christina had her."
"How long was I out?" I ask.
"10 hours," He says. I nod. Ellie starts to quiet down and closes her eyes.
"The doctors said you can go home once you feel stable," He says. I nod.
"I'm stable," I say.
"Alright," He answers. A nurse comes in and takes out my IV and Tobias and I leave.
We got home safely, not like it was too far from the hospital. I feel extremely tired.
"I'm gonna go to bed," I say.
"Alright," Tobias says. He puts Ellie to bed while I slide into bed. I close my eyes, but am awakened by Tobias sliding in next to me. He wrapshis arms around me, holding my back close to his chest. I hold his arm as best I could.
"I love you Tris," He says.
"I love you Tobias," I say. We drift off to sleep together.
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Divergent;an alternate ending
FanfictionWelcome to the world of Divergent, where no war had happened. What will go on in the city of Chicago where everything is peaceful? Will it stay like this? Read to find out!