~ Review 27 - Mr. CEO and His Doctor by Kot1234kat ~

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Mr. CEO and His Doctor
By Kit1234kat


A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

Soumya is a smart and passionate doctor. Her friend, Tae is a successful CEO.

Writing Style:

The writing style is in third person POV. The focus is mostly on Soumya and Tae depending on who is in the scene.

Spellings and Vocabulary: 3/10

SInce English isn't the author's first language, there are a lot of grammar, spelling and paragraphing errors.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

It gave me the vibe of a bts fan-fiction.

Strengths & Weaknesses:

The story is not bad but the writing makes it hard to read.

Recommendation:

I suggest using apps to fine tune and edit the work already done, this will help for better reading

Target Audience:

14-25

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel

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