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~ Review 44 - Woes of a Wealthy Genius by Thatgirlaturdoor ~

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Book Information
Title: Woes of a Wealthy Genius
Author: Thatgurlaturdoor
Genre: Romance, Unrequited love
Chapters: 21
Target Audience: 14-30

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Writing Style:

The book is written mainly in both first and third-person points of view, focusing on Dion's and Christine's characters. Regardless of the point of view, the thoughts of other characters aren't written except when there is a visible physical reaction. It is dialogue and physical description focused.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

The spelling and use of vocabulary are very good. Paragraphs are spaced well.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

I love the premise at which the book started. We are introduced to Christine's personality and status. I am also impressed with the way the male lead is introduced as a form of suspense. I resonate a lot with Christine given that I am also a believer.

The story being mostly about them in high school has me anxious as to what caused them to drift apart and meet after 10 years.

Recommendation:

I would suggest sticking to one form of POV regardless of who the focus would be on. If I could choose a safe POV, it would be writing in the third person. This easy you avoid the overuse of "I", "Me", etc.

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel