𝐅𝐢𝐱𝐞𝐫 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬 : 𝐏𝐨𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐩𝐞𝐧𝐬, 𝐄𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐬
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Every writer starts as a beginner, fueled by a simple idea and a spark of inspiration. But how do you turn that spark into a blazin...
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REVIEW
The trailer is mind-blowing, every corner plunges us onto a height of anticipation and excitement with its remarkable scenes portraying innocence, helplessness,failure, regret, despair, grief, content, surprise, power, and so on. This trailer also highlights the internal conflicts of the protagonist, Watanabe no Tenshi, along with the external elements that will be driving his superhero journey. Moreover, the introduction of Argus adds a sense of intrigue to the story, as in how Tenshi and Argus are connected to each other.
TITLE and COVER
The title "The Fallen Hero" fits with the plot line, as it shows how a person with no will to live changed into someone who will fight against the odds in order to save the world.
However, the fonts could be changed into something more eye-catching and attractive. Like, the one we see in the start of the trailer seems much better than the current one on the book cover.
Moving further to the cover, the picture of that man connects more to that dark shadow than the protagonist. The picture appears a bit dry, thus the author may consider using some more bright and full background that reflects the plot of the story.
BLURB
The blurb is giving too much information, leaving no room for intrigue or anticipation which might lead the readers to DNF(Do Not Finish) the book.
The first paragraph is good, but the author might consider eliminating the second paragraph.
The other paragraphs sound good, but try to avoid giving out everything just in the blurb.
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