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~Review 38 - Hidden Pathways by Reandra ~

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Book Information

Title: Hidden Pathways

Author : Reandra
Genre: Dark Fantasy
Chapters: 47
Target Auience: 15-40

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

There are many characters in this book, each unique in their way. They have what they are good at both magic users and normal humans alike.

Writing Style:
The book is written from a third-person point of view. The reader has an omnipresent and omniscient view of the story. It is very dialogue-based. The thoughts and personas of each character shine in the dialogue. The writing style has a poetic feel to it.

Spellings and Vocabulary:
The spelling and phrasing are well done. Paragraphing is well-spaced too.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

The cover page and emblem of the book are very well done. The story is heavily based on the dialogue between the characters. I love the morally grey attributes of each of the characters. No one is completely innocent. Everything they do is because they believe that is the right thing. It puts a lot of controversial morals into play as you continue in the story. I also enjoy the way each chapter ends. It is not abrupt but more like a cliffhanger.

Strengths & Weaknesses:

The plot is a unique one that works well. However, there are quite a lot of characters to keep track of and very few physical descriptions to identify them.

Recommendation:

I recommend against putting pictures in the middle of the story, instead of having a separate chapter for them.

You can also input unique physical descriptions of the characters into the storyline. This way the reader can remember who is in the scene.

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel