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~ Review 55 - The Misadventure of the Cutesy Bruisers by Superwicked ~

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by TEEN_FIX

by TEEN_FIX

Book Information
Title: The Misadventures of The Cutesy Bruisers
Author: Superwicked
Genre: Superhero
Chapters: 3
Target Audience: 13-20

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

There are six main characters in this story. They are all best friends with varying personalities and powers.

Writing Style:

The story is written in the third person pov with the spotlight being on the six girls, depending on what scene is being shown. The story is very descriptive with a balance of dialogues to back it up.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

There are little to no spelling errors. Punctuations can be worked on. Paragraphing needs more spacing to make it look readable.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

The beginning of the story seemed a bit confusing because there were a lot of things happening and the introduction of many characters at once.

Recommendation:

Because of the format of writing, I would advise giving two-line spacing between each paragraph.

I would advise limiting each chapter to at most two girls' povs. This is in regard to the first few chapters when they are just meeting their spirits.

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel