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~ Review 91 - Dooming Curse of the Bloom by yourFeathers ~

Book Title: Dooming Curse of the Bloom
Author: yourFeathers
Genre: dark fantasy
Target Audience: 16+
Current Status: 14/ongoing
Number of Chapters Read: 7

Reviewed by jambudweep

PLOT

The story has three plot going parallel to each other in different regions with different people.

First, there is a group of three friends. Adira, Kyler, Mckenzie, who are going on a quest to the fourth continent as per the queen's order. On their way to the island, they are to meet with natural disasters, and mysterious magical elements.

Secondly, there is another group of three friends, Jyota, Terra, and Caleb, who are dealing with a kind of cursed magic from a book.

Thirdly, there is a lovely couple, Arvid and Selena, who too are on their way to visit the fourth island, in search of some cure for Arvid's father.

The first seven chapters contain a noticeable amount of lore, like the different magic worn by all characters.

Talking about world-building, the foundation of all the three realms of kingdoms has a strong catch. Additionally, the hybrid characters give a unique touch to the storytelling.

However, I'd suggest taking time to fill readers' heads with one realm first, before jumping to the other. This way readers will get a clear idea of what is happening. Like, in Adira's case, till the time they meet Aysu and then both get unconscious. Then, jump to Caleb and the group till they get the security room key and are looking for some sorcerer. Afterwards, move to the prince and princess till the princess departure, and then go simultaneously with all three plots parallel.

Of course, this is just an idea. No pressure on changing or anything.

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