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~ Review 98 - Dance Of Hearts Vol 1 by @creatorofthechaos ~

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by TEEN_FIX

by TEEN_FIX

Book Information

Title : Dance of hearts Vol. 1Author : creatorofthechaos
Genre : Family Fiction, Drama, Romance
No. of chapters : 28
Target Audience : 18-40

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

All the characters in this story are interesting to say the least. Despite their differences, they all share one thing in common and that is being eccentric.

Writing Style:

This writing style is hard to categorize. It is in a dialogue format with the basis of the story being told through the characters' monologues.

It is written in what I can refer to as a script format.

Even the tone used by both adults and children is playful and friendly.

There is little to no description or environmental depiction of the surrounding area.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

The spelling of words is also based on who is speaking and how they are speaking. Given that there are children in this book, there are some intentional typos to depict how they talk.

Emotional Depth of the characters:

Despite all of it, the humor and love between the characters is not lost. I am reminded of a short episodic family drama when I read this story.

Scene structure and pacing:

The pacing follows a drama pattern rather than a book pattern. Regardless of the constant scene changes, the interest and persona of the characters are not lost.

Tone and Dialogue:

Dialogues and tone have no problem at all.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

This is a very unique and interesting way to tell a story. As I mentioned earlier, it feels like a family sitcom, very theatrical and humorous.

Recommendation:

Maybe it is the method you are using to type but if the intention is for the names to be in bold, it isn't translating well online.

Instead of using symbols like ### or ***, you could use the bold and italic or underline to pull attention.

A little background description wouldn't hurt here and there. Even a physical description of the characters to give your readers a good mental picture.

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