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~ Review 106 : Investigation to Dead Invention by @kuso_kashvi ~

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Book Information
Title: Investigation to Dead Invention
Author: kuso_kashvi
Genre : Murder Mystery, Thriller, Investigative
Chapter : 28

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

The characters all play their part in the story. There isn't much distinction in their manner of speaking.

Writing Style:

The writing style is from a first person point of view. It is a very dialogue focused book.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

Spelling, vocabulary, punctuation and paragraphing needs to be worked on extensively.

E. V. A . L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

I would advise reading books that are in line with this particular genre. You have a good story but your manner of presentation makes it difficult to keep up with.

Also, this genre of book requires a lot of description and progressive plot. We also would like a manner of tension or foreshadowing.