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~ Review 37 - ZOMBIE WORLD: The Apocalypse Begins by CrownedLordSuperior ~

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Book Information

Title: ZOMBIE WORLD: The Apocalypse Begins
Author: CrownedLordSuperior
Genre: Horror-Thriller
Chapters: 3 (ongoing)
Target Audience: 15-35

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

Dhurv is portrayed as very cunning, intelligent, manipulative, and strange. He is calculative and gives off a very ominous energy. He is hardly caught off guard and adapts to situations quite quickly.

Writing Style:

The book is written in the first-person point of view, and the main character's inner thoughts are vividly displayed throughout the story.

Spellings and Vocabulary: 9/10

There are little to no spelling and vocabulary errors. The paragraphing was very well done also.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression

I am very impressed by the opening chapter. It gives a very good view of the kind of main character we would be dealing with through the course of the story. It is also very rare to see characters with this kind of personality as the main lead of the story.

Strengths & Weaknesses:

The strengths of this story are the main character and the details of the attacks. It is very gory and descriptive.

Recommendation:

My only recommendation is to continue the story and watch out for minor details. As you are working on your description, make sure to use the right anatomy.

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel