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~Review 40 - Tumhati Pratiksha by charmingblush ~

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Book Information

Title: Tumhari Pratiksha
Author: charmingblush
Genre: Romance
Chapters: 37
Target Audience: 10-18

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Writing Style:

The writing style is in the first person point of view. There are a lot of the main speaker's thoughts written for the viewer to read.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

Spellings are written well. However, sentence construction, punctuation, and phrasing need to be worked on.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

The first 4 chapters threw me off. However, from Chapter 5 the picture of the story starts to get a bit clearer.

Recommendation:

I would suggest reducing the swear words in the story.

I think this story would be enjoyed mostly by people who speak the language used to write the story.

I would suggest going through the entire story again and correcting the spelling and grammar errors that are in English. As for the second language being used, I would suggest writing them in italics.

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