𝐅𝐢𝐱𝐞𝐫 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬 : 𝐏𝐨𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐩𝐞𝐧𝐬, 𝐄𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐬
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A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S
Characters:
The genie has a very sadistic and sensual energy in the book which negates Phoenix’s quiet and reserved side.
Writing Style:
The story is written in third person pov with the focus oscillating between Phoenix and the genie depending on the situation. There is attention given to gestures of characters, physical surroundings and only on the main character’s emotional state.
Spellings and Vocabulary:
Spelling has little to no errors. Vocabulary uses understandable and simple words. Sentence structure needs to be worked on. Paragraphs are well-spaced for easy reading.
E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N
Overall Impression:
It has a good opening that introduces us to the story of how the MC and the genie met each other. We are given subtle foreshadowing of a deeper history between them that is yet to be revealed.
The author went an extra mile to add subtle details into the story that explains the physique and dress style of the character.
Recommendation:
I would recommend reviewing the sentence structure used when the genie is speaking. It got me confused many times because it seemed like three people were talking at the same time.
My impression is that the genie has a dark side to him, which was speaking. I’m not clear on it.
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