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~ Review 104 : Charming Devil by @kiatya ~

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by TEEN_FIX

by TEEN_FIX

Book Information:
Book: Charming Devil
Author:
Genre: Mystery, Thriller
Chapters: 15

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

Agent Hayes is shown as a law-abiding agent. Her idea of right and wrong dances on a thin line but as long as she is wishing the bounds of the law, she is ready to do anything to get justice.

As a person, she has a good sense of humor and work ethics. She is however a very work-focused person. Her life revolves around getting justice.

Writing Style:

The story is written from a third person point of view. Despite the depiction being heavily influenced by the main character, the minor characters are also given some manner of recognition.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

The story is heavily law-enforcement based. So a lot of jargon and vocabulary used in this sector is included.

Dialogue paragraphing is well done but narration paragraphs can be worked on.

The spelling has little to no mistakes. Punctuation is done well but sentence structuring can be adjusted especially the places where the first letters of the Ene thence should be capitalized.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

The story starts by introducing us to Agent Hayes as a person and as a law-enforcement officer. How she works and who she works with.

Then slowly we are shown how she actually carries out her missions using deception and tricks to catch the bad guys.

However, this time, her prey is actually the predator who has had his eyes on her for a while, unknowingly to her.

Strengths & Weaknesses:

The strength of this book is in its description, especially the chase and fight scenes.

Even the dialogue has a good back and forth rhythm between the characters that it feels authentic.

Recommendation:

Just work on the paragraphing and that should be all. You have a good story here.

Maybe polish a bit of the scene transitions.