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~Review 93 - Twisted Vows by @ErieRyonn ~

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Book Information
Title: Twisted Vows
Author: ErieRyonn
Genre: Dark Romance
Chapters: 8
Target Audience:

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

Isabella is written as a smart, stubborn, relentless character. Despite her upbringing and father issues, she is determined to prove everyone wrong. One thing about her is that she knew when to charge ahead and when to accept defeat.

Dominic, on the other hand, is depicted as a controlling, dominant personality. Whatever he wants, he must have. He is not a man to take no for an answer. Any room he enters gets charged and all attention is drawn to him.

Writing Style:

The story is written from a first person point of view. We are shown the story from both Dominic and Isabellas' point of view.

The story isn't a description heavy writing style. It relies mostly on narration and dialogue to convey the story.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

There are little to no spelling errors and the vocabulary used is simple and easy to understand. The paragraphs are well-spaced for the description and dialogues.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

Their first impression is as expected. There is tension and hate lingering in the atmosphere. Isabella has the persona of a free bird, having her hard work stolen from her, and caged in a loveless marriage set her off pretty bad. Her to-be husband doesn't make the situation any better with his controlling personality.

Strengths & Weaknesses:

The biggest strength of this story is how Isabella's personality shines through. Despite the unpleasant situation she found herself, she still wanted it to be on her own terms. This can be shown in the littlest of things like her choice of jewelry, her decision to stand up to her mother and brother and other things.

Recommendation:

I would advise that for now, don't make Isabella soft. Don't let her get any idea that Dominic has a good side to him. It is too early for that and will make the story fall into the category of the many many cliche billionaire stories.

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