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~ Review 51 - Hues of a Murder by Ana_Miga ~

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by TEEN_FIX

Book Information:
Title: Hues of a Murder
Author: Ana_Miga
Genre: Murder Mystery
Chapters: 11
Target Audience: 15-30

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

The protagonist is layered and compelling, with a backstory that adds depth. Side characters play meaningful roles, contributing to the mystery rather than just filling space. The antagonists (or suspects) are well-written, leaving readers questioning their true intentions.

Writing Style:

The story is written in the third person point of view. There is a reduced exposure to thoughts of the characters given the genre of the book.

Some passages became too descriptive, which, made the story lose the element of mystery and surprise sometimes.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

There are a couple of spelling errors. The sentence structuring and punctuation need to be worked on. Paragraphs are too tightly written.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

This book is perfect for fans of psychological thrillers and crime fiction. Readers who enjoy deeply immersive mysteries with well-crafted suspense will find this novel captivating.

Recommendation:

The pacing of the story needs to be worked on to give the full mystery effect.

I would also suggest a comprehensive editing of the story, focusing on spelling, sentence, and paragraphing. Breaking down paragraphs into smaller pieces and letting dialogues stay alone will improve readability.

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel