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~ Review 101 - Dhruth by @archivesofrooh ~

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by TEEN_FIX

by TEEN_FIX

Book Information:
Title : Dhruth
Author :
Genre: Mystery Thriller (Trigger warning: murder, SA, violence)
Chapters: 6
Target Audience: 13-20

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

The main MC is portrayed as a rude, egotistic, rich bastard with no regard for other people's emotions. He believes the world is cruel which gives him the right to also be cruel to others. He only cares about his money and his business.

This is well shown from how he acts towards his wife on the first day of their wedding.

We can clearly see that he has some trauma from watching how his mother was treated by his father and it is reflected on his own personality. Especially the woman that has caused a rift between his parents and made his mother shed tears.

Writing Style:

The story is written from a third person point of view. The environment and story is heavily descriptive. The narration is more than dialogue.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

The spellings had little to no mistakes. However, paragraphing can be worked on. It is too packed.

The vocabulary used is simple and easy to understand. Punctuations are in the right places. The sentence structure ranges from simple to complex.

E. V. A. L. U. A T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

I can't feel any sense of mystery aside from the first chapter. The second chapter is truly where the story started for me by introducing the male MC, his persona and all there was to him.

Strengths & Weaknesses:

The strength of this book lies mainly in the male MC's personality. The female MC falls kind of short. In the sense that most of her scenes are a bit confusing to follow. So, I don't really understand her and her plans.

Recommendation:

It feels like a bit too much expository narration and less dialogue. Most of the story is getting lost because of the lack of proper paragraphing and too much information at once.

It's hard to read and there are places where languages change. I would suggest putting them in italics.