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~ Review 28 - Bleeding Through the Veil of Scars by IrisThorn02 ~

Book Information

Title: Bleeding Through the Veil of Scars

Author: IrisThorn02

Genre: Action, Thriller, Mafia, Mature, Unrequited Love

Chapters: 25 (ongoing)

Target Audience: 18-50, Young Adult

Summary:

Sinscarred Series #1

"The entire Cosa Nostra is at my mercy, and I am at the mercy of the person whose love breathes another"

Fiery and defiant, Serafina Moretti stands at the crossroads of duty and desire, her heart torn between familial obligation and the yearning for freedom.

But, she can do it all with a broken heart

"Sometimes duty and love aren't on the same side. I know that better than anyone."

Lucien Beauchene, the future head of the French Mafia, is torn between his obligations and the woman who holds his heart.

He walks a tightrope between honor and desire, bound by loyalty yet haunted by the consequences of his decisions.

He is a smooth operator, coast to coast, NYC to France.

Their journey unfolds in a realm where passion ignites, secrets unravel, and hearts collide in a dance of hope and despair.

Step into their world-a tapestry woven with betrayal and redemption, where the price of love may cost everything they hold dear.

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

Serafina is the daughter of an influential man, skilled in both the knife and poise. She is skilled, smart, intelligent, decisive and loving. However, she loves just one man. Lucien is the heir to the French Mafia. He has a cold exterior, smart, deadly and wealthy.

Writing Style:

The book is written from a first person point of view oscillating between Serafina and Lucien based on who is in the picture. We are able to see their feelings and emotions about certain decisions made.

Spellings and Vocabulary: 9/10

The spelling and vocabulary is well written with little to no mistakes

E. V. A L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

My first impression of the book was that it is very well written. I love the introduction that was included in the first part of the book. I really enjoy the writing style that you have gone with.

Strengths & Weaknesses:

The story building has a lot of potential for a good romance novel. However, there are not enough details to give a mental picture of the locations and accents of the characters.

Recommendation:

I need you to just continue writing.

It would be more captivating if the book was written with more details as if you are writing in third person.

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel