𝐅𝐢𝐱𝐞𝐫 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬 : 𝐏𝐨𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐩𝐞𝐧𝐬, 𝐄𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐬
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A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S
Writing Style:
The short story is written in first person pov, with focus on physical description and emotional response of the main character.
The first chapter is written in the form of a poem but there is no repeating or paragraphing form used. It is abstract written but conveys the sexual content.
Spellings and Vocabulary:
The sentences are well constructed, spelling has little to no errors but paragraphs need to be worked on.
E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N
Overall Impression:
The first chapter threw me off guard and was a little hard to read because of the spacing and lack of paragraphs.
The second chapter was more novel. However, there are some sentences that repeat themselves, while in certain cases they emphasize the feelings of the character, in other cases, they can be omitted.
The third chapter goes back to the way of the first chapter. I initially assumed chapter 1 was the prologue, hence, why it was written that way. But seeing the same in chapter 3, it is hard to read.
The writing used in this novel is not blunt but instead, the author gives us a tease and food for imagination. It is descriptive in a poetic way, sensual and not sexual.
Recommendation:
As much as the author intended on making the readers have a first hand experience of the sexual content, using too much description can make the scene lose tone.
For the first and third chapter, spacing will do a lot of good to it.
Also, you need to decide how you want the story to be written. Which way will be best to portray your ideas in writing?
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