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~ Review 45 - Fate and Love by Esha_Writes ~

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Book Information
Title: Fate and Love
Author: Esha_Writes
Genre: Forced Marriage
Chapters: 7
Target Audience: 13-25

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Writing Style:

The book is written in both first and third-person POV with the emphasis being on Abijay's character.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

There are few spelling errors and the paragraphs are spaced legibly.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

The plot is a very commonly used trop however with a twist being that the arranged couple already had feelings for each other before being anonymously married to each other by their family.

This uniqueness removes the whole plot of struggle and hatred between the two main leads that is typically seen in forced arranged marriage stories.

Recommendation:

I would suggest sticking to one form of writing. Both third and first POV are able to shine a kind of spotlight on one character if that is what the writer is going for.

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel