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~ Review 31 - Love's First Whispers by IrenicJ_stories ~

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Book Information

Title: Love's First Whispers
Author: IrenicJ_stories
Genre: Memoir, Romance
Chapters: 6
Target Audience: 14-30

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

The speaker is the male of the story. He is portrayed as quiet, introverted, innocent, imaginative, and very much in love.

Writing Style:

The story or memory is written in the first person. It has a very poetic and romantic tone. We can see and feel the character's emotions and who his love is devoted to. Each chapter has a heading that foretells what the body of the chapter will be about.

Spellings and Vocabulary: 7/10

There are a few spelling and grammar corrections that can be made.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

It is a very beautiful love story written from the perspective of a man. This is a very unique take on romance. I am quite impressed.

Recommendation:

I would advice trying to separate each timeline and not put them all together, to avoid confusion.

Also, too much time was spent describing the hotel room which could be focused on showing physical interactions and dialogues between the two lovers.

eviewed by Kanye_Ariel