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~ Review 49 - Love Tattoo by tipsydreamer ~

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by TEEN_FIX

by TEEN_FIX

Book Information
Title: Love Tattoo
Author: tipsydreamer
Genre: NewAdult
Chapters: 9
Target Audience: 15-35

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

I see Sakura being portrayed as a young, naive girl who just wants to be noticed by the man she loves even if it means changing some parts of herself. She is a high schooler and that counts largely to her innocence.

Yan, on the other hand, is raw, blunt, and experienced in everything except the things of the heart. As long as he could satisfy his body's cravings, he was alright. Much isn't shown to us about his in-depth persona, but he isn't a bad person or one who likes trouble.

Two people from two different worlds meet just because of a tattoo.

As the story progresses, we see another character being brought into the spotlight in the story, Makoto.

Her relationship with Yan borders on being a sister and a lover. She has been with him from the very beginning, she loved him and was willing to give it all to him. However, she had her fears and doubts, and slowly her fears started to turn to reality.

Writing Style:

The writing style is in the third person POV. Both main character's thoughts are given equal spotlight in this story. The actions and dialogue of others are seen but not their thoughts.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

he spelling, grammar, and sentence structure are well done. Vocabulary is well-spaced, allowing for easy reading.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

I enjoyed the synopsis of the story. Based on how the door was described, like the Japanese animation Susume, I actually thought it was going to be a fantasy novel. But I was fortunately disappointed that it paved the way for a story that made me think of someone I used to be.

The story isn't rainbows and sunshine but is very realistic and detailed without giving too much explicit information.

I like the fact that the names of the characters have profound meaning and play a part in their personality and in the story at large.

The story starts to spiral just when you think it will be a happy ending. Let's just say the future readers are in for a big shock.

Recommendation:

Some character's physical actions seem quite unnatural in the story. I would suggest going over the story and enacting each gesture and scene in your head to see how they flow into each other.

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel