𝐅𝐢𝐱𝐞𝐫 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬 : 𝐏𝐨𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐩𝐞𝐧𝐬, 𝐄𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐬
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Every writer starts as a beginner, fueled by a simple idea and a spark of inspiration. But how do you turn that spark into a blazin...
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A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S
Characters:
The main female character of this story is portrayed as a devoted, distracted, reclusive and detached artist. Her family is connected and wealthy but she has little to no interest in those. However, she is smart and quick on her feet when the situation arises.
The main male character is shown as cold but friendly, dangerous, protective, skeptical and cautious. He has had a rough childhood based on the details we have been given. He is very secretive and private.
Writing Style:
The story is written from a first person point of view. There is heavy detail in the description of environment and gestures. However, it doesn't overpower the dialogues exchanged in any scene.
Spellings and Vocabulary:
Spelling has no errors and sentence structure is simple. Punctuations are used in the right places. There is adequate spacing in paragraphs, both for narrative and dialogue.
E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N
Overall Impression:
The prologue took me by surprise by the details and description of the scene. The storytelling aspect was very interesting to see. Dialogue wasn't boring, however, it was casual and human. However, for a dark romance, I was expecting something darker. Like a traumatic backstory on the female lead's part that affected her psychologically or mentally.
Recommendation:
I don't have any advice to give off yet. Too early to make assumptions on the plat line.
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