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~ Review 43 - Secret of the Shadows by Sohinigoswami ~

Book Information

Title: Secret of the Shadows
Author: Sohinigoswami
Genre: Dark Poetry
Chapters: 22

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Theme:

The themes of the poems vary from the following: animate (animals), heartbreak, songs, holidays, seasons, etc. However, they have a somewhat dark element to them. It is very particular and somewhat subtle, the melancholy.

Writing Style:

There are various styles used throughout the poems. abab, freeform, 4 lines, 3 lines, or even one line are just examples of what was used. It is fluid and ever-changing. However, one consistent thing is that each sentence is not more than a line.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

Spelling and vocabulary is very well done. The words used are easy to understand and blend well together.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

First of all, I love the idea of highlighting focal points of lines, it makes reading and emphasis much easier for the reader. It gives them a form of vocal pacing and emphasis when they read it either in their mind or out loud.

Some of these poems could pass as song lyrics, which is a beautiful thing. It is quite difficult and requires true talent.

Recommendation:

For an easy poem style, tend to stick to one per poem. If it would be freestyle, let it be that way from start to finish. Also, pay attention to lines, 3 or 4 or whatever, let there be consistency for each poem.

Speak your poems out loud after writing, and see how they roll off the tongue and the emotions they are trying to show, this way you can feel and hear how your readers will perceive your work.

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel