𝐅𝐢𝐱𝐞𝐫 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬 : 𝐏𝐨𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐩𝐞𝐧𝐬, 𝐄𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐬
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A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S
Characters:
Elizabeth is portrayed as a dreamer, quite imaginative but her dreams got shattered by one event. She might be reserved but she doesn’t mince her words when the situation calls for it.
Writing Style:
The book is written in both first and third person point of view, oscillating between the two. The story in its entirety is focused on Elizabeth.
Spellings and Vocabulary:
Spelling has little to no errors. Vocabulary and sentence structure is done well. Paragraphing can be worked on.
E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N
Overall Impression:
The book gives me the energy of an old Wattpad winter book. It has that winter, skating vibe going on so far. However, the romance and chemistry between the couple isn’t a lot. There is more focus on the female lead and her gaining back her confidence and dreams.
Recommendation:
I would recommend not putting the dialogue in bold fonts, and also work on breaking down your paragraphs. If you want the dialogue to stand out, let them be a paragraph of their own.
I would also advise against switching between two points of views in the prologue. You want this first chapter to capture the reader's attention. Stick to third person and give a grand view of this event that is the focal point of the story.
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