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~ Review 46 - Silent Vows: A tale of passionate love by Kaoriwritess ~

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by TEEN_FIX

Book Information
Title: Silent Vows: A tale of passionate love
Author: Kaoriwritess
Genre: Arranged Marriage
Chapters: 18
Target Audience:

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:
The story revolves around three characters and their love story. A man and his conflicted heart between his old love and his new love.

Vivaan is outspoken, bold, and athletic but lacks morals due to his up-bringing. However, his character grows throughout the story as he has to make decisions and face life on his own.

Reet and Prisha are two sides of a spectrum with the former being introverted and shy, while the latter is more outspoken and bold, often clashing with Vivaan.

Writing Style:

The writing style is in third person POV. The thoughts and actions of all the characters are written vividly for the writer to see and immerse in.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

Spelling, grammar, and vocabulary are well written. Paragraphs are spaced well.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

This story will have you rooting for both females because they are equally good people and match the male character in their own unique way.

Recommendation:

I would advise reducing the amount of times you use their names. You can use other pronouns to indicate instead.

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel